Saturday, October 13, 2007

Childhood Habits, final version

"It’s mine! Don’t be a brat, Michelle!” she said.

"Mom said it’s for us to share. So share.” Michelle said, crossing her arms.

“I’m telling!” Jessica grabbed the phone and dialed.

“Billing office, this-“

“Mom, Michelle won’t share!” Jessica cried.

“YOU TWO ARE SEVENTEEN!” She hung up.

2 comments:

robyn said...

heh, thats funny. it's a lot easier to understand now. nice job.

Jenna said...

I like your final.
It makes is a lot more clear. :)